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I'll Be Watching

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Shortlisted for the Sheila A. Egoff Children's Literature Prize

In a small prairie town like Argue, Saskatchewan, everyone knows everybody else's business. Everyone knows that the Loney family has been barely hanging on — the father, George, reduced to drink and despair since the loss of his farm and the death of his wife, Margaret. That the four Loney children do not get along with George's second wife, the pious, bitter Effie. Then George dies in a drunken stupor — locked out, it seems, by Effie to freeze to death on his own doorstep. Effie takes off with a traveling Bible salesman, and it looks as though the children are done for. Who's to save them when everyone is coping with their own problems — the lingering depression and the loss of the town's young men to the Second World War.

Yet somehow the children find a way, under the watchful eye of their ghostly parents and through the small kindnesses of a few neighbors, but mostly by dint of their own determination and ingenuity.

This is an extremely powerful novel about children at risk because of adult hypocrisy, indifference, self-interest and outright immorality, all cloaked in a self-righteous exterior. In the end they redeem their own lives by drawing good people to them and by rising to the occasion themselves. And when they at last are able to leave Argue, they do so together, as a family looking ahead to a future of promise and hope.

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    • School Library Journal

      September 1, 2011

      Gr 9 Up-Porter tells the story of the Loney family and a patchwork of other townspeople living in Argue, Saskatchewan in the early 1940s. Margaret Loney passed away in a snowy car wreck, draining the last bit of hope from her already disillusioned husband, George. Their kids, Ran, 16; Nora, 14; Jim, 12; and little Addie, struggle to live with their hard-drinking father and his embittered new wife of convenience, Effie. When George freezes to death in a blizzard and Effie promptly runs off with a traveling Bible salesman, the kids are left on their own. Ran enlists in the military to support his family and escape their hopeless state. The story is told in lyrical verse by the family members (including the ghosts of Margaret and George) as well as various townspeople. Through them, readers catch a glimpse into unforgiving life in a small, prairie town. Porter vividly captures both the depths of the Loney children's poverty and their ingenuity in making ends meet. The premise that their parents' ghosts are watching over them is sweet, but somewhat out of place and hokey in the middle of such harsh realism. The novel touches on first love and the struggle to decide on one's life direction, but it doesn't push far enough into this part of Ran's and Nora's experiences to heighten the story's impact. Likewise, the town's other backstories (incest and anti-German sentiment to name two) are compelling, but not deep-rooted. While stalwart fans of historical fiction, or this era, will likely enjoy this story and the Canadian perspective, both Steven Herrick's Cold Skin (Front Street) and Helen Frost's Crossing Stones (Farrar, both 2009) provide more satisfying emotional connections.-Jill Heritage Maza, Montclair Kimberley Academy, Montclair, NJ

      Copyright 2011 School Library Journal, LLC Used with permission.

    • Kirkus

      July 1, 2011

      Kindness ultimately prevails, but not before hard times and ugly parochialism have their ways with several small-town residents, particularly three orphaned and then abandoned children.

      Cast in the voices of the four Loney children, their neighbors, their dead parents and other witnesses living or otherwise, Porter's free-verse poems tell a bleak story in plain, bleak language. The children are left to shift for themselves through a hard Saskatchewan winter after a series of miseries. First, their drunkard father freezes to death on the porch after being locked out, then their harsh stepmother abruptly departs with a traveling con man. Finally, the eldest, Randall, goes off to war (this is 1941). Not surprisingly, 14-year-old Nora and her two younger brothers quickly find themselves in desperate straits. The quiet acts of charity that help them get by are almost hidden beneath the weight of the local gossips' cruel attitudes, the forced departures of the town's German school teacher and a minister's daughter sexually abused by her father and such less-public miseries as a postmistress who intercepts the money that Randall sends home and a lonely doctor who discourages his daughter's recovery from polio. Though an extended side story about Randall's experiences as a downed aviator in Nazi territory comes off as tangential, the admirably resilient Loneys well merit the ending's reunions and new lives.

      Strongly felt, if overstuffed, family drama. (Historical fiction/verse. 12-16)

      (COPYRIGHT (2011) KIRKUS REVIEWS/NIELSEN BUSINESS MEDIA, INC. ALL RIGHTS RESERVED.)

    • Booklist

      October 1, 2011
      Grades 7-12 In 1941 Saskatchewan, the orphaned Loneys (Ran, 16; Nora, 14; Jim, 12; and Addie, 7) try their best to manage after their stepmother abandons them. Money is scarce, so Ran enlists in the RCAF, Nora becomes a housemaid, and Jim cuts Christmas trees and tries to hunt rabbits. Despite Ran's plane being shot down over Germany, Nora being assaulted by her minister employer, and the small-mindedness of some townsfolk, the Loneys survivethanks to their deceased parents' watchfulness, the efforts of sympathetic neighbors, and their own resilience. Porter, author of the Governor General's Awardwinning The Crazy Man (2005), echoes her earlier themes here: the severity of prairie life, small-town intolerance, unexpected kindnesses, and the difficulties of life without a safety net. The free verse reads smoothly, and the use of multiple narrators allows readers access to the necessary omniscience. Full of rich, believable characters, this emotionally taut story offers no simple solutions, only a window of hope. Give to fans of Wendy Phillips' Fishtailing (2010) or Alma Fullerton's Libertad (2008).(Reprinted with permission of Booklist, copyright 2011, American Library Association.)

    • The Horn Book

      January 1, 2012
      It's 1941 in Argue, Saskatchewan. Nora, Jim Ran, and Addie are orphans unsure how to get through winter with no real survival skills beyond ghostly parents doing their best to watch over them. Porter's verse novel presents multiple voices acting as oral histories of characters recording moments in a desperate time. The siblings' concluding measure of hope is well earned and welcome.

      (Copyright 2012 by The Horn Book, Incorporated, Boston. All rights reserved.)

    • The Horn Book

      November 1, 2011
      "I will find a life away from this town" is a common sentiment in 1941 in the prairie town of Argue, Saskatchewan. It's a town best left behind, but it takes some tough seasons before the Loney children -- Nora, Jim Ran, and Addie -- find a way to do just that. Their parents have died, and the orphans live on the wrong side of the tracks, unsure of how to survive the harsh winter with no real jobs or survival skills beyond ghostly parents doing their best to watch over them. Fourteen-year-old Nora tries to take charge, once Ran has joined the air force, but it's a group effort and, with various acts of kindness from neighbors, they do scrape by. However, there is no "it takes a village" theme going on here. Meanness abounds, from petty gossip to sexual abuse to a town's willingness to make outsiders of anyone different -- but coincident with the arrival of spring, crocuses bloom, the Loneys escape Argue, and good news arrives. Porter's verse novel presents multiple voices acting as oral histories of characters recording moments in a desperate time, like a Canadian Out of the Dust, but with a chorus of voices rather than one. As stark as the tale may be, it feels true, and when the Loney children make their way out of the prairie town that "may one day turn to dust," their measure of hope is well earned and welcome. dean schneider

      (Copyright 2011 by The Horn Book, Incorporated, Boston. All rights reserved.)

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  • ATOS Level:5.5
  • Lexile® Measure:880
  • Interest Level:9-12(UG)
  • Text Difficulty:4-5

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